Customer Reviews
Didn't read. Bought this from TKO Studies who have touted themselves in the past as a "comics and graphic novel" company. This is a prose novel with a couple of illustrations. Very disappointed. Website needs to make this way more clear, especially given TKO's background as a graphic novel publisher.
I'm about 3/4 of the way through the book as I write this review, and my hope is that someone at TKO will take notice and print a second edition of this book that is far less jarring to read. The story itself is great. As someone that does not typically read horror books, I've always wondered how the genre works in written form. I'm captivated, feeling a lot of what the main character is feeling. As their stress levels increase, I can feel my own anxiety and stress increase. But the editing on this book leaves a lot to be desired. There are many instances where sentences randomly drop to a new line, sometimes even with a word in the middle of that line being capitalized because whatever was used to write the book clearly saw it as a new sentence. I've come across several egregious grammatical errors, and even a case where Italics were used and left on for the first word of the next sentence where it didn't belong. There's even an early section of the book that is just duplicated for no reason. I'm struggling to believe anyone looked over this book before sending it to printing.
